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I was the canvas.
You stretched and shaped me so you could paint me with your color.
Every stroke hurt, every color ached
From your palate to plain white surface.

I was your instrument.
You played me so painfully well.
I believed I was the music and with me you could create life,
Love, and beauty so eternal, yet brief.

I was your tomb.
You buried in me your dreadful intentions.
I took them inside so willingly
Eager to believe I saved you from yourself.

I was your tongue.
As you lied to me, I lied to myself.
The mouth speaks but the ears listen...
I heard what I wanted to hear.

You were my mirror.
In you, I saw the deepest truths of myself...
And thus, turned away from the reflection.
©2009-2010 *Batticus
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Author's Comments

Love.

I think I've used the canvas imagery before... I don't know why, but I just like it.

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:iconblueskye27:
What a great poem...
:icondaiidreamz:
awwh that was awesomely nice!!
:clap:

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live ur life in black n blue!!!
:iconbatticus:
Kiitos! Thank you!

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R.I.P. Gary C. Sheppard 1958-1998 :heart:
Ilmaisia halauksia!! / Free hugs!! :hug:
Miksi naurat? Onko suomenkieleni niin kehnoa?
:iconbatticus:
Thank you, love!

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R.I.P. Gary C. Sheppard 1958-1998 :heart:
Ilmaisia halauksia!! / Free hugs!! :hug:
Miksi naurat? Onko suomenkieleni niin kehnoa?
:iconvv-valoxx:
beautiful work, as always! :+fav: :hug:

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I HAVE MOVED ACCOUNTS!!
:iconbatticus:
Thank you very much! Kiitoksia oikein paljon!!

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R.I.P. Gary C. Sheppard 1958-1998 :heart:
Ilmaisia halauksia!! / Free hugs!! :hug:
Miksi naurat? Onko suomenkieleni niin kehnoa?
:iconvv-valoxx:
you're very welcome! olet erittäin tervetullut...is that right? lol

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I HAVE MOVED ACCOUNTS!!
:iconbatticus:
:D Whee! Rakastan suomea oikein paljon!

It might be right... did you translate each word separately?

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R.I.P. Gary C. Sheppard 1958-1998 :heart:
Ilmaisia halauksia!! / Free hugs!! :hug:
Miksi naurat? Onko suomenkieleni niin kehnoa?

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